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Wednesday, 24 April 2013

KYUN HAI NAGRAJ




Overall rating 
3.0
story 
3.0
artwork 
3.0


Story: Jolly & Anupam Sinha

Anupam Sinha-Jolly Sinha…..Yeh Dono Naam sunte hi kisi bhi comic lover ko ek achchi comics aur bharpoor Manoranjan ki guarantee mil jaati hai.
Lekin surprisingly “Kyun Hai Nagraj” iss baat ke opposite direction mein gayi hai.
Ek thaki huyi kahani…….Sequences ke Intresting bante hi unhe khatam karke unki hatya……..kahani mein achanak se prakat ho jaate charaters…….Nagraj ka bina kisi pareshaani ke Apni nayi-Nayi powers se unhe khatam karte jaana…….Bina kisi mushqil ke…..woh bhi kai jagah bina define kiye…….kyunki Nagraj ki body ko Ab “Define” jaise words se kai guna door kar diya gaya hai.
Comics ko neeche karne ki bachi khuchi kasar……dialogues aur Inking ki immaturity ne poori kar di.
Kahani ko padhne ki rochak shuruaat…..Aakhiri panno tak pahucte-pahucte Dum tod kar niraash kar deti hai.

Artwork-

Pencilling….Anupam Sinha.
Anupam ji ki Pencilling dekhne laayak hai……Cover aur first page hi bata dete hain ki Andar ke pages Anupam ji kaaphi mehnat se banaye hain.

Inking…..Gaurav Srivastav
Ek hi word kaaphi hoga Inking ke level ke liye..”Niraashajanak”
Gauruv ji ko Inking par bahut jyaada mehnat karne ki jaroorat hai…..woh bhi tab jab Nagraj aur Anupam ji ki Comics hai.
Chehro par Expressions kaise laaye jaate hain……yeh unhe Abhi nahin aaya….Faces Statue jaise lag rahe hain…jinpar pata hi nahin chal raha ki kya bhaav-bhangima aa aur jaa rahi hain.
Nagraj poori comic mein ek bhi Frame mein aisa nahin laga ki usse badhiya kaha jaa sake…….Anupam ji ki pencil ne Artwork bacha liye thoda bahut…..
Baaki character ka bhi yahi haal hai……Zulu pehle wala Zulu nahin laga…aur Naa hi baaki characters bhi kisi bhi alag frame mein ek jaise lage.
RC se request hai…..ki Anupam ji ki Pencil par pehle ki tarah Sagar Thapa ji se kaam karaya jaaye……toh Inking level mein sudhaar aayega.

Color….Sunil
Iss baar ek galti Coloring mein huyi hai……Dr Zulu ki….Skin ko Nagraj ki tarah hi Gora dikhaya gaya hai…..uski Puraani comics se woh bilkul bhi match nahin kar raha……RC ko aisi cheezo ka dhyaan rakhna chahiye.
Overall…..Apne first part “Nagraj hai Naa” ke comparison mein “Kyun hai Nagraj” bahut Niraash karti hai.
RC se request hai ki woh Readers ko Isse jyaada achchi aur manoranjan se bharpoor Stories aur Artworks de.


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