Overall rating | 3.0 | |
story | 3.0 | |
artwork | 3.0 |
Story: Jolly & Anupam Sinha
Anupam Sinha-Jolly Sinha…..Yeh Dono Naam sunte hi kisi bhi comic lover
ko ek achchi comics aur bharpoor Manoranjan ki guarantee mil jaati hai.
Lekin surprisingly “Kyun Hai Nagraj” iss baat ke opposite direction mein gayi hai.
Ek thaki huyi kahani…….Sequences ke Intresting bante hi unhe khatam
karke unki hatya……..kahani mein achanak se prakat ho jaate
charaters…….Nagraj ka bina kisi pareshaani ke Apni nayi-Nayi powers se
unhe khatam karte jaana…….Bina kisi mushqil ke…..woh bhi kai jagah bina
define kiye…….kyunki Nagraj ki body ko Ab “Define” jaise words se kai
guna door kar diya gaya hai.
Comics ko neeche karne ki bachi khuchi kasar……dialogues aur Inking ki immaturity ne poori kar di.
Kahani ko padhne ki rochak shuruaat…..Aakhiri panno tak pahucte-pahucte Dum tod kar niraash kar deti hai.
Artwork-
Pencilling….Anupam Sinha.
Anupam ji ki Pencilling dekhne laayak hai……Cover aur first page hi bata
dete hain ki Andar ke pages Anupam ji kaaphi mehnat se banaye hain.
Inking…..Gaurav Srivastav
Ek hi word kaaphi hoga Inking ke level ke liye..”Niraashajanak”
Gauruv ji ko Inking par bahut jyaada mehnat karne ki jaroorat hai…..woh bhi tab jab Nagraj aur Anupam ji ki Comics hai.
Chehro par Expressions kaise laaye jaate hain……yeh unhe Abhi nahin
aaya….Faces Statue jaise lag rahe hain…jinpar pata hi nahin chal raha ki
kya bhaav-bhangima aa aur jaa rahi hain.
Nagraj poori comic mein ek bhi Frame mein aisa nahin laga ki usse
badhiya kaha jaa sake…….Anupam ji ki pencil ne Artwork bacha liye thoda
bahut…..
Baaki character ka bhi yahi haal hai……Zulu pehle wala Zulu nahin
laga…aur Naa hi baaki characters bhi kisi bhi alag frame mein ek jaise
lage.
RC se request hai…..ki Anupam ji ki Pencil par pehle ki tarah Sagar
Thapa ji se kaam karaya jaaye……toh Inking level mein sudhaar aayega.
Color….Sunil
Iss baar ek galti Coloring mein huyi hai……Dr Zulu ki….Skin ko Nagraj ki
tarah hi Gora dikhaya gaya hai…..uski Puraani comics se woh bilkul bhi
match nahin kar raha……RC ko aisi cheezo ka dhyaan rakhna chahiye.
Overall…..Apne first part “Nagraj hai Naa” ke comparison mein “Kyun hai Nagraj” bahut Niraash karti hai.
RC se request hai ki woh Readers ko Isse jyaada achchi aur manoranjan se bharpoor Stories aur Artworks de.
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